Release

He clings to me

like the butterfly 

who commits to the direction of the wind

that releases him from the web

in which he winds himself up,

and thought he would be stuck,

forever.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, some people just do that...they have a certain beauty that intrigues us. but sometimes that beauty wanes because of the clinging...we want to release the other...hope a wind will come by and whisk him or her away...
very interesting, short write that allows us to go to our own place.
j.

[Laura Kate]

Thank you Jacob, I really enjoy reading your analysis! Laura

[Chris Shaw]

I love your voice here. Beautiful poetic expression LauraKate. Well conveyed.

Chris

[Laura Kate]

Many thanks for your lovely feedback Chris.
Laura

[Chris Shaw]

Keep writing :)