Mornings in Spring

Beauty so blinding...

Sun rose
 Beautiful petals
  Eyes wide
   I caught it
    And fell

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words. You made me believe and see. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Laurierose]

This completely made my day! I appreciate the sincerity.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Onlyme]

Wow, beautiful images held within this short, sweet, endearing poem.

[Laurierose]

I like to think of the slow, unraveling of a flower. Thank you for the touching review.

[Crowley]

that kind of fall is never forgotten, the only kind that feels both good and bad. Beautiful lines, loved it!

[Laurierose]

One of the most exciting yet terrifying falls, indeed I agree. Thank you for the sincere review!

[Jade]

I wish it was spring already, this is very beautiful

[Laurierose]

It's one of the most scenic times of year. Thank you for the sincere review.

[Jade]

not a problem

[Moonie]

I think you've done a good job with the wordplay here! With "rose" being both the flower and the past tense of "rise", and the ending with the catch and the fall.

[Laurierose]

Ah! I see you've caught that, lol. Thank you!

[barleygirl]

This is startling to read becuz it doesn't end the way I thought it would. Perfect depiction of being lured into a trap disguised as a rosy scene! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Laurierose]

Yes, the falling can be scary...even in love if we're not careful. Thanks for the sincere review.

[Wild Rose]

wish it was a morning in spring

That's the thing with roses > They dont last very long
Catch them when you can

[Laurierose]

Hold them close and commit the smell to memory. Thanks for the review!