My Lady Done Did Me Wrong

My Lady Done Did Me Wrong

A Poem by LawrenceRaybon
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A Blues version of Old Mother Hubbard, from the perspective of the dog. My wife and I used to run a puppet troop and this is a song we were thinking about doing with puppets.

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DOG:

Well, Old Mother Hubbard
She went to the cupboard
To get her poor dog a bone.

But when she got there,
The cupboard was bare,
And so the poor dog got none, none, none.

My lady done did me wrong!
My lady done did me wrong!
My lady, my lady done did me wrong!

Well, this little doggy,
He got no bone,
And now Mother Hubbard went and left him alone!

My lady done did me wrong!
My lady done did me wrong!
My lady, my lady done did me wrong!

*TRUMPET SOLO*

My lady done did me wrong!
My lady done did me wrong!
My lady, my lady done did me wrong!


MOTHER HUBBARD:

Well little doggy,
I went to the store,
We were out of bones so I got you some more!

Little doggy why ya face so long?
Thought ya mama done did you wrong?
But, Mother Hubbard never did you no wrong!


DOG:     MOTHER HUBBARD:

*TRUMPET SOLO*

My lady done did me right! That's right!
My lady done did me right! Uh-huh
My lady done did me so right!
You're such a good doggie!

© 2014 LawrenceRaybon


Author's Note

LawrenceRaybon
What do you think? It sounds good in my head...

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Man, I love this. This should definitely be illustrated and published in a children's story style. It could even make you some money with the right illustrations and the right publisher. Good luck with it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pretty good!! I think it would be a good song, wish i could hear it with music!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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LawrenceRaybon

Jackson, MS



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