Spring Sisters

A song in honor of April and May

Sweetly April weeps

May, with her verdant hankie

Wipes the tears away

Author's Note

What to you think? Is this Senryu or Haiku?

Reviews

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i believe i'd call it haiku since it's relating to nature and seasons,and the last line really defines the tone, summing things up. senryu is more general, according to my understanding of such things. anyway, it was nicely done whatever it is, though there's something about a green hankie that is a little unsettling.

[DaughterNature]

I never thought I would see the word "hankie" in a haiku, but well done! I think the first line probably requires a period at the end, and the second almost definitely requires an ending comma, but overall, I love it!