First Anniversary

First Anniversary

A Story by LawrenceRaybon
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A 50 word micro story

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He takes her hand

 

'Sweetheart,

It has only been a year,

but I have cherished every minute.

Every laugh and smile,

and pout, and fight.'

 

He smiles slightly, shrugs bashfully.

 

'Well, the makeup part, yeah?'

 

“And now pregnant? 

I can almost see our future…

Almost…”

 

He cries into her coffin.


© 2016 LawrenceRaybon



Author's Note

LawrenceRaybon
This was written for a contest that stipulated, make the judge cry in 50 words or less. Any feedback is welcome.

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Added on October 25, 2016
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LawrenceRaybon
LawrenceRaybon

Jackson, MS



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