The color that continues to fade

The color that continues to fade

A Poem by Vertigo
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Nothing is ever the same and nothing is ever worth doing when you have to do it alone...

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Bravery is fickle to the sunlight
Brazing irises in the soundless waves
And our gazes are apart in passing
Like our shadows meeting under the same edging day
Where we live to breathe
And fade further away
Oh these lonely followings as I sit at the steps
And gaze
Underneath the solemn quake
And my life that continues to take and take and take
In the color that continues to fade...

© 2010 Vertigo


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And my life that continues to take and take and take
In the color that continues to fade...

SO GREAT!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beyond beautiful...You create images...that are so...clear...more clear than one would expect...You put together beautiful words...and turn them into something...amazing....phenomenal write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well done! I like the nice descriptions.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


That is really good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lat two lines..breathtaking..
Well written..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 26, 2010
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