Young Blood

Young blood,
talented young soul,
don't give up
in today's flaws.

Fight for your
cause.
Ask for help
if you must.
Just be careful
who you trust.

I'll be here
to share my thoughts,
as others will share
their own with you,
young blood.

Remember,
many will try
to hurt you with
actions and words,
but those should only
make you stronger
than before.

With time
you'll make up
your own mind,
don't let others play
with that,
because there are vultures
that want to
corrupt your life.

So beware
and don't forget
who you were,
who you are,
'cause who you will be
you can't predict.

Reviews

[Anne Bathory]

I must say I enjoyed it thoroughly!

[Leandro Mendez]

thanks a lot Anne :)

[Zahra]

very nice, good message. Thanks for sharing.

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you for reading!

[s y e]

O_O

I won't forget it! Ever! Pinky promise, hahaha. xD

~ Noodle.

[Leandro Mendez]

hahah i hope so..just dont forget that it is a game but in the end its not.. if that makes sense hahah

[s y e]

It does make sense, I think, haha!

[Frieda P]

Wow you make writing poetry sound like dangerous sport Leandro, oh, wait, it can be....good one! Good message here for anyone who's not knowledgeable to what lurks beyond.

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you Frieda! hehe some don't realize till its too late..

[Frieda P]

True but even a smart cookie can get snagged..my pleasure Leandro.

[NA]

Great advice for a young one staring out...well penned :)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you Raven again :)

[writer in trial]

i will take this seriously because i need to be aware :D
nice job again. ;)

[Leandro Mendez]

thank you :)