Re(fl/j)ection

Re(fl/j)ection

A Poem by Leaner Pastures
"

...in your eyes...

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truth is lies

threw different I's


© 2010 Leaner Pastures



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Okay, I REALLY dig this but, I have a question. What is up with everyone on this site using the word 'threw' where they should be using 'through'? Maybe it's because I'm certified to teach English and a stickler for grammar but, EVERYBODY does it. I don't get it. Well, GREAT POEM anyway. : )

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The words are true. You are amazing. In six words you wrote a complete poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very nice.
A lot of meaning crammed into two lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

as one chaos magician once stated:

Nothing is true, therefor everything is permitted

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay, I REALLY dig this but, I have a question. What is up with everyone on this site using the word 'threw' where they should be using 'through'? Maybe it's because I'm certified to teach English and a stickler for grammar but, EVERYBODY does it. I don't get it. Well, GREAT POEM anyway. : )

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very cute..."truth" is simply the thing we believe today...soon enough, it becomes untrue, though not necessarily a lie, which implies deceit...like I said, very cute, but not true...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW...few words with lots of meaning. Have been doing a lot of this lately (the title)...Wonderful work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 12, 2010
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No more land of Fat and Honey for me... I'm off in search of Leaner Pastures ________________________________________ Most of my work is straight to the page and unedited, striving for the puri.. more..

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