SUGARTOWN

SUGARTOWN

A Poem by LeeLee Ryder
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luscious creamy xmas treats

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SUGARTOWN

MOUTH WATERING CHOCOLATE FLAVORED LOVE
SLIDES DOWN SLOPES OF PENETRATING STARS ABOVE

TINKLING JUICY PINWHEELS & CHERRY PAINTED PIES
SPIN TIL THE DAY HITS THE SUNSET FLAVORED SKIES

TART POMEGRANATES & SUGARY POWDERED CAKE
FLY UP TO THE CEILING TIL THE HEART BEGINS TO ACHE

LAUGHING PEACHY SYRUP & FRUITY LEMON DROP
RUNS INTO THE OCEAN & MAKES THE EYES GO POP

SMILING KUMQUAT SOUFFLES & CHILI PEPPERED CREMES
HEAT UP THE MIND N BODY & ELECTRIFY OUR DREAMS


©2009 LLR 122409 610P

© 2009 LeeLee Ryder


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I want all of these since you mentioned it.
Otherwise I am hard on myself; passing by treats
in the super market except for organic jellies.
xoxo,
Jack

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Ron
Gorged, full, obese, I hate that feeling too. This poem shows excess as it is. Craving ghastlyness! Like the work a lot!

Posted 14 Years Ago


yay for ear candy!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I cannot say I ever tasted a kumquat souffle or a chili pepper creme, but they both sound interesting! Thanks for the fun look into your crazy fridge!
Happy Holidays, LeeLee.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You have a wonderful way of making food and treats so SEXY!!

I love this, but not have to go brush. Too much sugar, bad for the pearly whites!!
Wonderful, witty, lyrical..


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very cute. The poem's so sweet, I think I felt a cavity while reading this... or was that just from smiling and drooling? All that aside, this was great.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such good sweet foods to be ate. A excellent poem. It made me desire a lot of candy and good things.
Coyote.


Posted 14 Years Ago


I thought this was cute
And enjoyable read!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


ok kind of sexy but it did make me smile.
Thanks for sharing LeeLee.
Merry Christmas
Kelley Enzo

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Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 25, 2009
Last Updated on December 25, 2009
Tags: sugar, pomegranate, mouth watering, fruity, syrup, peachy, lemon drop
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LeeLee Ryder
LeeLee Ryder

Mtn Extraordinaire, CA



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