Liberty Spell

This is a chant to help release our minds from fear and give us the power to overcome our obstacles; wether they be political, mental, emotional, economic or otherwise.

 

 

The rains of your misery we absorb like the sea

in deserted neglect we will bloom just like flowers

to the action of theft we restore with our gifts

and to the darkness of treachery a torch we will be

 

As the fire of insult we quench with our praise

and the stone of indifference with such roots we will tilt

from the grip of your tyranny we slide like the sand

to the face of your lies open palms we will raise

 

To the flood of your ignorance, we stand like the rock

as the chains on the truth with our minds we will rust

such divison and fear we will heal with our love

 till such anger and hate are no longer real

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

The rains of your misery we absorb like the sea

Please absorb all my miseries!! Hahaha.

Anyway, This is the kind of poem that needs a couple of readings before finally getting the idea. Only then can one be able to appreciate the beauty of the message. I like it that way. Keep inspiring! :)

[L.Edward]

Of course, thats what I do best! Thanx for taking the time to really appreciate it.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

My pleasure! :x

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, my friend. I needed that. A write of love and generosity. Very nice.

[L.Edward]

Cheers muchly. Its a great source of strength for me this one. A mantra against adversity of all kinds.

[ayosonolowo]

Nice poem i really like the flow, thank you

[L.Edward]

Thank you kindly for stopping by.

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[emmajoy]

I had to read this three times and read more slowly each time.. too much metre for me at first, somehow putting more emphasis on that than the content. Having slowed my reading, i felt the intention; will return until each word means the calm and release that you ask for your reviewers.

Must quickly add that the core of this is quite lovely.

[L.Edward]

Cheers. Thank you for taking the time to get into this piece. Much appreciated. Good to know how others are enjoying it.

[Zahra]

This is a beautiful, healing piece. Nice sentiments shown.

[L.Edward]

Thank you for taking the time. Best wishes.

[Sami Khalil]

Bravo: I like the title , the poem and the message behind the words. It flows like a stream of water...:)

[L.Edward]

Well noted Sami. I was very inspired by water for this one. Many thanx.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[John]

I like the driving reassuring rhythm of this piece and the theme of beneficent nature, the only true restorer of our lost faith.

[L.Edward]

Thank you kindly. I was inspired by the elements. Particularly water. The idea that something that can be incredibly soft and fluid, yet harder than steel when it is comporessed, has always fascinated me. Comprehension of such things always have a very zen quality to them.

[Mother Maggie]

Amazingly beautiful image.

Namaste

[L.Edward]

Many thanx. Maggie.