The face

The face

As I ponder alone, in my room
The absence of you, leaves me to loom
When I've made peace, with this uneasy place
I always capture a glimpse, of this seeming face
In corners of dark spaces, catching my peripheral eye
I just want to be left alone, but you're consistent to pry
Is it my unconsciousness, manifesting itself
Or have I gone mad long ago, my mind on a dusty shelf

Reviews

[Luisa König]

i really like this. it's very deep and sets free a lot of emotions x.

[Inject Positivity]

smartly done.... it speaks to the reader about how the previous love has left the speaker in an uncomfortable situation..... some of the words in poem were catchy and i truly enjoyed the whole concept dear poetess..... im a fan of your poems now.... full ratings...