Perfecshion

Perfecshion

A Poem by Legion
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A piece about true perfecshion. Yes, I know it is spelled perfection, but it is in keeping with the theme of the poem.

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Perfecshion

 

Deception wanes

With the travesty of time.

Those condiments of embellishment

Used by the establishment,

Cast aside, we should, with prejudism

and a preference

Towards realization.

Age-defying is an illusive reflection

Staining the perfecshion beneath.

Bare the truth

That this masquerade is an unbearable foolishness.

Endure and embrace

This humanity whole-heartedly.

Flawed and fallible,

A perfecshion designed by God, the Almighty.

 

Legion

11Jan08

 

© 2012 Legion


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The piece flowed well, and I generally genuinely liked it. I was thrown off a wee bit, by the word itself though. I could not help but draw a conclusion that this world is perfect in the eyes of some drunken God.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it. It was very deep. Good write. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't get it, but I should probably read it when I'm feeling a bit better

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hit and miss yet still a good write

Dostani

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

" Bare the truth That this masquerade is an unbearable foolishness."

Deep...good flow...powerful write.

" Flawed and fallible "
Very good line....



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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