Contradicting Lennon

A contradiction and the thought of life without someone you love. A haiku of sorts.

Contradicting Lennon

 

 

John said, "Imagine

there's no Heaven.", but I can't

See life without you.

 

Legion

8Mar08

Reviews

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

A heavenly lovebite ... Good job, Legion!
GBU

[literarygirl37]

Beautiful. Proof that it doesn't take many words to say what you mean.

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. oh boy!!! ... this is nutttts!!! ... how could i have been so afraid to read this? ... i love this!!! ... outstanding!!! ... insane!!! ... you rock :D ...

[Jon Lattone]

Yeah I really this! Very thought provoking :) John Lennon had alot to say.. and apparently so do you lol.
Thanks for your previous review. Good work padre :)

[spence]

A thought provoking Ku- heaven is relative to the eye of the beholder. An excellent take on Lennon's most famous song- if only we could make it a heaven on earth for everyone, cheers, spence

[Brianna Brie]

Enjoyable Haiku...got to love them. They are just a snippet of creativity!

[MIA ST. PAUL]

Very short and sweet. with alot of meaning.

Mia :)

[Adrian K. Smith]

I despise works like this. I mean, I really do. I am a verbose man by nature, yet were I to unleash pages and pages of word after word; I could not match the power you have here.

Well done...

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Loved the truth in this.

[Lily1111]

What a warm, lovely sentiment expressed here.