Light Falls

Light Falls

A Poem by Legion
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Originally for a six word contest. It even rhymes.

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Light Falls

 

 

 

He fell,

 

From Heaven

 

Into Hell.

 

 

Legion

01Jun08

© 2009 Legion


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I loved it! How much more powerful can six words get than that. Lucifer fell from heaven to hell; timeless.

Clever and creative!

Chaos~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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HAHAHAHHAHHAH....this was funny and VERY VERY CLEVER!!...HAHAHAHA........and i especially LOVE the title!!....its fits superbly!! hahaha...Light Falls!! Hilarious!!!

ty for making me laugh real loud!

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Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The hell is now!

Wonderful composition it is...

Soon he will emerge from the hell into knowing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple yet effective. Nice work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and of course I immediately think of Lucifer, though it could mean many kinds of falling, it is the title that seems to label this as the intent...thank you for taking time to read Tyburn, it is always welcome to get a nudge

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obvious meaning and great word choice!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the simplist of words often carry the most depth ;)

...pork chops on the menu tonight then ~laughs evilly~


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well put...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again, just a well chosen or used words, but a tome in meaning.

The meaning is obvious, yet somehow subtle.

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

powerful 6 words,,, what is eary is that it was a 6 word poem about a fallen angel, which some say is the devils number.. very good and kind of creepy!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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