The Kiss

The Kiss

A Poem by Legolas
"

What I imagine my first kiss will be like.

"
She leaned against me,
her cheek brushing mine.
She breathed she loved me,
as her lips were touching my ear.
Her arms around me,
a shield against the bad.
My arms around her,
protecting her from the hurt.
As she looks at me,
her eyes pierce my heart.
Her smile sets it free.
Her lips are close to mine. 
I relax as her breath warms my soul.
Then, her beautiful, perfect lips,
touch mine.
I never want this moment to end. 
When I'm here with her, 
nothing can touch me.
Nothing else matters.
She is everything.

© 2012 Legolas


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Abliet with few grammatic errors, but it's okay. It's very emotional and romantic, i like your flow of thoughts and the way you expressed your feelings to her. Yeah, i miss that feeling too. She would be very lucky girl to have you (:
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D



Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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So beautiful :,). I love how it doesn't start with the kiss but a little bit before. Good job!
I've never been kissed but this was wonderful. And, I'm assuming, accurate. lol :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I have never been kissed before either but I would love my first kiss to be like this.
Romance, Love :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful and so sweet! Great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful! Soo adorable(:
Loved it!
Savvy

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! Some first kiss, huh!? You really grabbed my attention and I was right there with you the whole time. Makes me think of my first kiss (the first one that felt right).

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful!! I love it :) it really pulls you in!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abliet with few grammatic errors, but it's okay. It's very emotional and romantic, i like your flow of thoughts and the way you expressed your feelings to her. Yeah, i miss that feeling too. She would be very lucky girl to have you (:
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D



Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So amazing ~ really enjoyed

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thanks tai:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This brings back the content feeling of life by bringing back memories. Ah, how I miss the feeling. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 23, 2012
Last Updated on August 2, 2012
Tags: love, kiss, poetry, romance

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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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