Never fading

Never fading

A Poem by Legolas

Sun sets in the west.

Tides flow in and out, but your
beauty never fades

© 2012 Legolas


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Very nice. There is eloquence in the simplicity of this poem. A simple description, a simple comparison, that contains great depth. I must confess I rather like this.

I've never been much into the reading or writing of Haiku, but this isn't bad. Maybe I'll stop by and read a few more of your works before the day is done. Have a good one.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
I love writing Haiku. The challenge of trying to get the right amount of .. read more
Caradoc

11 Years Ago

Perhaps one day I'll give it a try myself. The challenge does sound rewarding. I myself am rather fo.. read more
Legolas

11 Years Ago

Yes. I haven't tried that form.



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Very nice. There is eloquence in the simplicity of this poem. A simple description, a simple comparison, that contains great depth. I must confess I rather like this.

I've never been much into the reading or writing of Haiku, but this isn't bad. Maybe I'll stop by and read a few more of your works before the day is done. Have a good one.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
I love writing Haiku. The challenge of trying to get the right amount of .. read more
Caradoc

11 Years Ago

Perhaps one day I'll give it a try myself. The challenge does sound rewarding. I myself am rather fo.. read more
Legolas

11 Years Ago

Yes. I haven't tried that form.
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Alm
This must be one of my favorite haikus. And as some reviewers have said, it seems it can be read backwards as well. Timeless beauty isn't only aesthetic, that's what I get. :)

-Alm

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So simple and sweet! Amazing job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish I knew your writing process. It's lovely btw. And here are a few extra words so I get a a point for this review. Lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you all!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


so simple and lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice haiku! I like the way you compare change and invariance. I would think and say that your special someone has every reason to feel very special indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice soft haiku... traditionally they are meant to be read backwards as well as forwards.. takes an interesting spin that way

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, this is so sweet. Whoever this was written for is very lucky to know someone like you. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on June 25, 2012
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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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