On the Border

On the Border

A Poem by Leigh Green

 

On the border there is never quite enough

But if your eye is keen and your aim is true

If you are lucky you can navigate your way through

Out there, somewhere there is a peaceful beauty

 

And all along and seemingly forgotten

In the wild wood where the ancient druid vines hang

There is an eternal feeling of a world untouched

The essence of a previous age that lingers on

 

But not a mile from there across the littered ground

An ugly new way of living is being born

Where people camp and work, just clinging on to life

And amongst them there is an excited feeling

 

A new restlessness of hope and fear grows like a virus

Which in its infancy somehow will last forever

And from it a million and one dreams are born

They are lived, shattered and then disregarded

 

On the border there is no fixed state of being

They are the Lost Lands where indecision rules

And people are caught in the shadows between

They are forced to go where they don’t want to


© 2017 Leigh Green



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This is fascinating!
Totally utterly fascinating.
I made it a favorite so I can quickly find it and reread it.
Awesome wrork, Leighgreen

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it brings to mind the feelings of being torn between reality and the ideal way of life. great job.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love this as a whole but that last stanza says it all.. I love it..xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leigh Green

4 Years Ago

Thanks Lily
WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
Kept my mind straight into this poem, and wounder what this poem is caged up and be tortured (in other words this poems shows many emotion that one should not see)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a case sometimes for saying that we shouldn't see too much. Even though our visions are grand they don't truly represent the intimations we see. Its a little like seeing Victoria Station in a vision without realizing the connections it serves to different parts of the city.

The sensation that arises from such an experience is a little like drowning in an ocean if we don't realize why we are there in the first place.

Posted 4 Years Ago


intriguing...i'd like 2 things from this 1) to have u make it longer....and 2) to hear u read it because i feel this needs t be spoken aloud

Posted 4 Years Ago


For everyone stuck in between.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on October 23, 2012
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Tags: limbo, grey, gray, border, edge, in between

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Leigh Green
Leigh Green

United Kingdom



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