Be free

Be free

A Poem by Lenny Hart

Freedom from within , to be who we are .
To grasp our own selves to reach out and go far .
No barriers external just those from inside.
The barriers that protect , our true selves that we hide .
Let our hair down , let our inner being roam free.
Let loose , be happy show us all , let us see.
It just takes one to be brave , to set free their own mind.
To see our worlds mysteries to seek and to find .
Be free I say , no barriers , no more should we hide.
Let our minds open up , let our souls be our guide.
To be free from our stress, life that restricts who we are.
Let free our own selves to venture out and go far.
Lenny Hart 27/3/17

© 2017 Lenny Hart



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Great poem! Very motivational. Your musicality, if you don't mind my saying, would flow smoother in line 5 were you to dispense with the second "let" and just leave it at "our inner being roam free" (for with the first "let" at the start of the line, the second "let" in the second clause is already implied). Also the penultimate line is a bit confusing in what it wants to say. Is there a typo in "life"? You could even dispense with that and the "that" following it, and replace the two words with "what" (which would also smooth out the musicality). Well done!

Posted 10 Months Ago


(applauds) This poem could be used as a fantastic motivational speech. :D Brilliant poem here, mate. :)

Posted 10 Months Ago



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