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Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by Leslie Philibert
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for Carl Sharpe

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Autumn is a frozen church
We wait at heavy doors
That smell of rust,

Not a moon cold enough
To be called heartless
Or breathclouds of old steam

More an estuary of
Dumped mist afraid to ice;
The taste of wax on your lips;

A frame of hair round a
Hatted face, our steps as slow
As if we must tread water,

You are ice and rain and
The first crystals and even
More than this, beside me.


© 2014 Leslie Philibert



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wonderful use of metaphor : Autumn is a frozen church, it's all very clever. great stuff

Posted 2 Years Ago


this is soo beautiful, I love every single line

Posted 2 Years Ago


you have a fairly unique eye when it comes to observations of thew world around you

Posted 2 Years Ago


She appears to be, at least, one church at which you worship.
Stately, yet undeniably charming, Leslie
High-level work, my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This poem is metaphorical the way I see it. There is an implied metaphor of a woman who is as cool as Atumn. If 'Atumn is a froozen church' that woman must be godly, since chuch is a body where we raise godly women. Your last three lines struck me most. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love how you compared Autumn to a frozen church! I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours. It flows well and is beautifully well written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


As deep and as layered a a candle flame reflected in old coloured silk. Remarkable is insufficient.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Truly beautiful piece you've written here.
"More an estuary of
Dumped mist afraid to ice;
The taste of wax on your lips;"
I found this excerpt particularly moving.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Reading this poem was a very vivid and beautiful experience of the season.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Excellent description of the season and makes it welcome and inviting. I've never heard it so described and grateful that I have now.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Leslie Philibert
Leslie Philibert

Bavaria, Germany



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