Obsessed

Obsessed

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

Pick up the phone!

I know you are alone.

Why do you ignore me?

We were ment to be!

I left you a note.

Did you even read what I wrote?

I love you!

What do I need to do,

To show you that I care.

I KNOW YOU'RE THERE!

I can hear you breathe.

You can't make me leave.

Why wont you come outside!

Boy there is no reason to hide.

I'm not mad.

You have just been bad.

I know you didn't mean to turn me down.

You were just trying be a funny clown ^_^

But now there is something you need to know.

I will be everywhere you go...........

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
There are a lot of girls out there that dont take rejection easy...

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Wow, very intense. There is a thin line between love and obsession. I loved it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow!! lol I thought you were going to break the glass!! I ALLLLLWAYS wanted at least ONE girl to obsess over me..... but didn't get many past being friends or just for sex. There is a movie called "Cape Fear" I think you will Love to watch, if this poem is liked by YOU, too, as well! Very very intense... LOVE it!! xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


Soo true haha :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading this, Good Job. :) There are some girls That I know, that are like this. haha. :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great poem!! I know way too many girls who are like this!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That's a very deep depiction of being obsessed with the apple of your eye. I could just feel the raw emotions jumping off the screen as I read your poem. Great job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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MAC
this is a good write...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Obsession is the single most wasteful human activity, because with an obsession you keep coming back and back and back to the same question and never get an answer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Secret Lullaby

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review(;
MAC

11 Years Ago

completely agree with this statement
This poem is awesome and I agree. I have had a few friends for lack of a better word "Stalked" by ex's or girls they haven’t even dated! GReat job keep sending me RR's :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Secret Lullaby

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review(:

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Added on January 23, 2013
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It a new year and a new me. I have deleted my old information and have decided to start over. Life is full of ups and downs, disapointments, regrets, mistakes...but all these things make us who were a.. more..

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