Hush Little Baby

Hush little baby,

Don't you cry.

Don't go to sleep,

With thoughts of goodbye.

Put down that razer.

Put down that knife.

Don't make tonight,

The last night of your life.

I know its hard.

I know its tough.

But dont say,

That you've had enough.

So little darling,

Wipe away your tears.

And I'll be here,

To take away your fears.

 

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Love this poem! Really sweet!!

[AlwaysCasey]

Love this. Beautifully written and I love how you used a nursery rhyme.

[Alex Vidmar]

Love this. Especially the nursery rhyme intro.

[eatmills]

I like the nursey rhyme begining. It gives the poem more meaning.

[FelicityAllona]

WOW! :))
I love your selection of words. I love the rhyme. I love the theme.
I love the entire poem.

[CriticalxxAngel]

This was really great and I'm sure many people need to read something like that and can relate to it. Loved this poem very much.

[Baby Ricochet]

Kinda creepy nursery rhyme. Good rhyme

[B-poet]

It's nice to have a shoulder to cry on every now & then when life becomes too unbearable to live through. Great work Secret Lullaby. An intriguing write & read. :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Everyone needs someone to help them out every once in awhile. I like how this flows, the only thing that threw me off was "The last night of you life." It would read better with your instead of "you."

Good Job

[beautiful dreamer]

awwwwwe this is adorable and sweet and kind of you to write for somebody! i love this poem!