Sea Of Forever Ending Dreams

 

 

Tears have finally created the Sea.

Our Sea of forever ending dreams.

It grows like our pain.

And knows no shame.

The waters will forever flow.

Like the hidden feelings that I never did show.
We have let our Sea get to rough.

When will we learn that enough is enough.

Waves crash with each emotion.

 And cuts, deeper then any ocean.

The sea of forever ending dreams.

Is finally taking you away from me.

We are both drifting farther away.

But like this Sea, my hate will stay.

 

Reviews

[Lovely Soul]

I love it. Nice work :)

[Forevermore]

i love this, its mindblowing, the stuff i love to read

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Touching, heartfelt piece. Beautifully penned.

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is beautifully written :) Very nice job

[Angelic Surrender]

This is beautiful :) great work

[WinterIce<3]

I love the way you expressed your self throught this poem
Our Sea of forever ending dreams.

It grows like our pain.

And knows no shame
I love this part is my favorite part

[SilentNiaAngel]

"Tears have finally created the Sea.

Our Sea of forever ending dreams.

It grows like our pain.

And knows no shame."

I love that part. I admire this poem=)

[just is]

Tears have finally created the Sea.
Our Sea of forever ending dreams.
it grows like our pain.
And knows no shame.

I totally loved this part, this is amazing.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Good emotions and imagery, I like it a lot! Good write! :)

[eatmills]

Ouch! Such an incredible piece you have written. A storm of angered emotions. Well done.