I need you

 

 

I need you to take my hand.

And help me stand.

I need you to stay with me tonight.

Becuse I'm filled with so much fright.

I need you to wipe away my tears.

And help strip away all these fears.

I need you to save me.

Becuse I have been weak lately.

I need you to be the light.

And be the one who makes things right.

I need you more then you could ever know.

Becuse when I am with you, my strength starts to grow.

Reviews

[-musicfunk-]

simple and simply amazing
=]

[Her Guardian Angel]

Noticed patterns, but wasnt sure which was the one you wanted noticed. But this is a very strong, beautifully written piece.

[Lovely Soul]

Beautiful

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Yes, I noticed the pattern, you did it cleverly, and the poem has a good flow. And I love the meaning!

[WinterIce<3]

I like this poem very much and i like the pattern and the decent flow of the poem :) I always love your poems because they are very well-written and you express yourself through your writings very good

[eatmills]

Very cool. I like how you did the pattern and really strengthened it by having a decent flow to your piece. Really good job.

[....]

Awe this one captivated me, such a longing I felt.
This is wonderful.

[SilentNiaAngel]

I love this it flows nicely & i love the rhyming!

[Forevermore]

i notice the pattern and its also a sweet write, i like this

[SuicidePact.]

fantastic flow