I don't wanna be me

I dont wanna be me.

I dont want to have these secrets

I don't want to live this life.

I don't want to be the face in the mirror.

I don't want to have these bad dreams.

I don't want to have these cuts

 

I don't wanna be me.

I dont want to live this lie.

I don't want to have these tears.

I don't want to have these thoughts.

I don't want to be your disapointment.

I don't want to breath anymore.

 

Reviews

[Angelic Surrender]

Depressing and deep. Though, there is always something in life to look forward to. Some ray of hope no matter how small. If you find it, and focus on it, soon you will be blinded to all else. Just as when you stare at a bright light. Soon you can't see anything at all except that light. This is a good poem.

[Bpoet]

Change the inner beauty of a person so they can live with becoming a better (me) person. Great poem displaying the inner pain of someone who dying for a drastic change in life. :)

[Chris Miller]

that was really sad and deep. but i liked it. nice job

[♛ Jordan Midnight..]

I am gonna Say this Leslie. you are a wonderful Person. you have allot of potential you never give yourself credit for, and you are the best friend I have had in a long time. You Have an amazing heart and with that comes downfalls. I know they hurt but they are not you. They are a source to strengthen you. I love the person you are. Always have always will. If you ever need to talk I am here for you.

[Britt]

Sad, but it was a good poem. but i do know how you feel.

[Wickedly Kind]

breathe not breath lol it's still well written

[AlwaysCasey]

Some things fall apart so other things can fall together. A very deep poem, whatever the case is, remember something or someone you love. That will help you through the day. It will be the light in the darkness.

[paradise]

scary and sad to read abouty

[The Siren]

Lol yes it feels terrible when we're in this situation. So I know how you feel. You've expressed deep sorrow in this poem. Good work!

[Davi Rodrigues]

Yeah, I'd have to say there's no place for optimistic advice like that after reading a poem like this. This is clearly nothing about being able to look at a better prospect.
I think it's interesting to focus on how the poem actually presents a loss of the self-appreciation due to love. The reason for all those feelings of inadequation is the feeling of being a disappointment to someone who, for the writer's most recurrent works, we can guess to be a beloved one.
But for that picture of emotion over reason, though, the poem is not very unique. I think there could be a little more... Craft.

[Lovely Soul]

I agree with Angelic S.
Great poem, though.