Fallen Angel

He once belonged to the light.

And fought for what "they" said was right.

His image could stop your heart.

Just as he spred his wings apart.

But that was befor the war.

Then he was an angel no more.

But he did not die.

He just chose a different side.

For he was one of the few that fell,

And descended into hell.

His wings turned black.

He knew he could never go back.

Now he has a black heart.

And his soul has come apart.

Becuse he listend to the voices in his head,

Telling him that the goodness in him was dead.

So now that he has fallen,

Hell is now callen

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[-musicfunk-]

perfect rhyming words =]

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is amazingly written! You did an accurate representation of the story and also put emotion into it as well. This is very beautiful

[barakanaga16]

I agree with the other reviews :)

[Angelic Surrender]

This is awesome

[Lillianna Rey]

i love this especially since im a huge fan of writing focused on fallen angels. this can relate to many situations and to me personally on a few levels. very good write.

[ROSALIND]

awesome poem such passion engulfed with such emotion well done

[Mike]

I love this it can be felt in many different situations

[Gurdeep...The Lost<>]

Nice....keep up the gud work...)

[Whiskurz]

The story of the fallen angel......Good write.....Whisk

[Daniel]

>:) Welcome to the darkside, we have cookies. Last time I checked there was milk too.