Heart Beat

I lay my head on your chest.

I like this position the best.

Becuse I can hear every heart beat,

of a heart that I will forever keep.

We stand under the bright moon,

Wishing this didn't have to end so soon.

Becuse soon I will be going away.

And I will miss you everyday.

You pull me close and tight.

I cling to yo with all my might.

I try to remeber every beat,

Of a heart I will forever keep.

Author's Note

I wrote this for my bf.... miss you Logan

Reviews

[Kiara]

I love this, its kind of like my situation. Thank you for writing this

[CHRIS ANDES]

great love poem
one of a kind
=]

[外人 (Gaiji..]

This poem was amazing !! Seriously, it is so full of sweetness, emotion even naiveness, you've shared with us a very personal moment and even the way you did it was so sweet :) Thank you for this wonderful poem, wish one day to find my soulmate as well !

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I really like this except for small misspelled words:
Becuse: should be--Because
Yo:should be--you
Rember:should be--Remember

Other than those mistakes, this is great and cute! Logan would love this :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[BatFan38]

love love love this

[ROSALIND]

I really love this well expressed very sweet

[Blue Ivory]

awwww how cute!

[Lina Grey]

So sweet. Losing a loved one in any way can be difficult. Your boyfriend must be so happy to have you. Thank you.