Disintegrating Man

Disintegrating Man

A Poem by Letemdangle

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I've felt the tiger's fang upon  my neck. 
The bullet chambered with me in mind.  
A hammer bludgeoning my opponent to death.


Held and honed my  Knife splits me from you.  
Contempt and space delivers sobriety.  
I witness your melt upon the Earth.

There is no place , no time, or moment.  
We expand, we contract. We fill the void.  
My friends, we are celluloid. 


Your life, my life, Organic shrapnel to melt away.
We are  like leaves on a walkway. 
Burning acid,  until our eyes, Never see.

© 2011 Letemdangle



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Can see why you like our Elvis Costello as your poetry reminds me of his take on life with songs like A good year for the roses as both embody love captured within the pain and anquish life throws at us. Maybe the leaves can become the basis of a scrap book of time spent together rather than the death of summer dreams. Love it, keep em' coming

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Can see why you like our Elvis Costello as your poetry reminds me of his take on life with songs like A good year for the roses as both embody love captured within the pain and anquish life throws at us. Maybe the leaves can become the basis of a scrap book of time spent together rather than the death of summer dreams. Love it, keep em' coming

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Letemdangle
Letemdangle

Ottawa, Canada



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My best achievement in life is never having killed anyone. My nickname is not to make you think I am morbid, I use it as a symbol of injustice. Let him dangle is a song about injustice from Elvis Cos.. more..

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