Five Takes From Friday

Five Takes From Friday

A Poem by Letemdangle

It foamed like flagrant tomes derived from yesterdays.

My breath it held mercy death beyond it's peak.

The tiny bit of life convulsed like puking rabbits.
I knew not my keep!

To chew the necks of those for sustenance.  
I shut their eyes, bent their hands.
I disfigured until the episode held no  relevance.

The meat was sweet,  the swallow sour.  
My head held high,  my soul devoured! 

© 2011 Letemdangle

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this is great- love when poems make me re-read them several times and think deeply unlike literal poems

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wow loved this!

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Added on October 30, 2011
Last Updated on October 30, 2011



Ottawa, Canada

My best achievement in life is never having killed anyone. My nickname is not to make you think I am morbid, I use it as a symbol of injustice. Let him dangle is a song about injustice from Elvis Cos.. more..

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