Music So Warm

I,

Am not alone,

The water is cold

But your gaze so warm,

Each breeze carries the notes of a violin,

Its song carresses my skin

As I stand and listen,

I,

Am listening,

 

The clouds shift

Revealing a lively sun,

It's light kisses my face,

I look up to accept its embrace,

though the water is cold,

The sun's light is so warm,

I,

Am glowing,

 

Here it comes,

The violin is pouring out its soul,

Its spirit crashes to the shore

With the waves,

But the sun,

Its wings of light take flight,

As it strokes the keys of a piano,

Such a story it sings,

I,

Am paying attention,

 

And then there it is,

Right in front of me,

The music takes form,

Into a giant tree,

The song taking shape in its rich green leaves,

The roots dig deep into the sand,

The waves lick its harsh bark,

But the violin is the resulting sound,

 

And then there it is,

The sun,

It breathes onto the tree,

The leaves stretch to soak it in,

And as the breeze fights with each one,

I here the piano,

Its song,

 

The water is cold,

But the music so warm,

See?

I,

Am Listening.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Music can bring peace to any moment. The violin in my favorite sound. Take talent to bring life and music to the violin. I like the feel and emotion in the poem. The complete poem was amazing. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sasavet]

Ahh good old music :) It is amazing and I find it's pretty indescribable in all it's beauty, but this did a very good job I thought :D. Even music of the world, like wind or waves as you stated can be just as lovely and you portrayed it very well here, Good Work :)

[John McGrael]

this is a wonderful poem!!!! i love it!!!! being a musician/composer myself as well as a writer, i really like the music imagery

and the tree!!! this reminds me of my own poem "the seedling"!!
this is really good!!!

[bluessadmood]

Oh my friend you are both a dreamer ,a composer and a fantasy teller,you let things roll into so many others..
Not alone,water cold but your gaze so warm,the breeze carries notes of violin to me,caress my skin as I listen
The sun comes again ,kisses my face,look up accept its embrace..and the water is cold ,the sun is warm,and I glow
The violin pours its soul,a story it sings,the music takes for of a giant tree,rich leaves,roots gig deep
waves lick its bark,the sun breathes on it,the leaves stretch to soak in it,and i hear the song ,water cold,music so warm
Oh god..keep dreaming my friend,your dreams takes us to some wonderful world,I swear I was with you seeing all this magic
lovely write..