Numbers that matter to me.

One is ment fo you being my number one person in the world.

Two stands for the two of us.

Three is a crowd.

Four is how many day I wish I could spend with you with no one taking you away from me.

Five stands for how many times I think of you within a minute.

 Six is how many footsteps you've planted in my heart.

 Seven is the times I've wanted to call you every time we've hung up.

Eight is how many dreams I've had of you.

Nine is the years we've known each other.

 And Ten is how many times you've betrayd me.

 And I still trust you with my shattered, broken heart.

Reviews

[Tachycardia]

This is very cute, I enjoyed reading it.
Don't worry, real poets make mistakes.

[xXbloodyVampire]

The grammar and spelling in the poem needs a bit of fixing but its a lovely write.

[MIA ST. PAUL]

This piece is very well written. I like the flow and the imagery! very nice, Also I have been reading your poetry and I Like the way you take chances with the writting style and lay-out. Take chances and keep being creative! Uniqueness is a wonderful atribute!

Love your writtng keep it up

[Bethany Woody]

This piece is wonderful. I love how you tell so much with so few words. Each line is like a chapter in the story of two lovers and each time the number goes up we see a little more of the interaction between the two adn how that interaction affects the author. i wish I had thought of a piece like this.