Even Angels Fall

This is my confessional... It's depressing...you've been warned...

Blood pours fom my slit wrists

My silent screams ripping through the night air

God seemes to have turned his face from me

I lay here and bleed, tears streaking down my cheeks

My pale body glows in the dark night, reflecting the moon

Demons lick their lips, their rotting hands reaching for me

Wanting to drag me down into their world

I lay on rotting leaves and soil infested with slimy creatures that crawl all over me

I shiver, slowly convulsing, my breath coming in soft gasps

The Devil beckons to me, calling me as one of his own

Should I go...?

If Heaven has no use for me, where else is there to go but Hell?

I stand and the ground burns under my feet

Fire licking my skin

But I don't feel it...

My feet are torn and bleeding

But I feel no pain...

I choose to wander the Earth forever...

Lost in this empty life...

A Fallen Angel...

Author's Note

Sorry for this...it really is depressing...

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

its refreshing for how clearly you portray it...
its equivalent to splashing my face with blood (instead of water) to wake up
painfully sharp, like drawing a knife through the heart to provoke a reaction...

[Vesa Lee]

It is depressing. Very much so.
And yet none the less brilliant for being so.
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If Heaven has no use for me, where else is there to go but Hell?
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That part made me pause, demanding thought on my part.
Strong emotions here.
Executed remarkably well.
Thanks you for posting.

[Jason]

I am truly intrigued by your reference to God's eyes being closed to you. It is a quite different approach to the understanding and beauty your words portray. You paint poems with your words, rather then just write poems. You are truly an artist at the heart..., and a talented one at that. The way you flow with your words, your passion and your heart. Your confession, in it's own way is of pure beauty. I really like this write...and I am in your corner, rooting for ya! It takes alot to post something this deep and personal as a confessional....but you did it wonderfully. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

[bluessadmood]

Oh this is a haunting depressing write ..
Screams ripping through night air..God seems to have left me
I lay there and bleed..tears streak down my cheeks
demons reach out for me with their rotting hands
Calling for me,shall I go,but where else if heavens no more
So I stand there ,my feet on burning grounds but feel no pain
I bleed ,lost and wander the earth..forever
that was a depressed write..I like how one should choose between heaven or hell
I enjoyed this a lot..
lovely write..

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yes its depressing..but its good
Great Job :)