I Am Alive

I Am Alive

A Poem by Ciara
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I am alive and I will fight through this hell we were all placed in. Until I breathe my very last breath, I will fight against the devil and I will make it to God's kingdom.

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I Am Alive

This world is a burning furnace 
Pulling in victims to the depths of its hell
We go there and back 
We experience the pain of life
I feel the hurt, I feel the sting 
I am alive

People in this red hot inferno 
Fall to the misery 
Losing hope in all things good
They pound you down, they pound me down 
We feel the ache and agony 
I am alive

The soreness caused by this torment 
Picking at your will
Beating on the last hand keeping you dangling off the cliff
The fear of the fall begins to settle in 
But it's not time to give up 
I am alive 

The rebellion starts 
The strong break free 
And escape Hades grip
There are no worries of getting dragged back in 
The ability to fight still exists 
I am alive

© 2014 Ciara



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Amazing and well thought out. Can't wait to see more like this. Good luck. Fox-

Posted 3 Years Ago


A song of pain. I think you penned this naturally from experience. I bow to this one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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It's so dramatic and deep. I could almost hear someone shouting this in agony. Gave me chills. I love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Added on January 24, 2014
Last Updated on January 25, 2014
Tags: Reality, Fighting, Strength, Hell, Life


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