You Made Me This Way

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You Made Me This Way

The voices, they talk

Shadows linger where they're not

Your voice fills the air

But you're not even here

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up

In a padded room

So so far away from you

Forever

 

Why do I see you

When no one else can

Why can I hear you

From where I stand

 

I can't believe that

No one else knows

What's wrong with me

But one

And that one won't show

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up in a rubber room

So so far away from you

Forever

Forever

 

Colors swirl

(Colors swirl)-echo

Floors tilt

(Floors tilt)-echo

Chaos builds

(Chaos builds)-echo

Time stands still

(Time stands still)-echo

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up in a padded room

So so far away from you

 

You make me so crazy

I'm crossing the bridge to insanity

I need to be locked up in a padded room

So so far away from you

Forever

Forever, my love, forever

Forever

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Heyyyyy now, this is the first song I've ever written, so be nice please. But... really..... what did you think?

Reviews

[murrill]

At first I thought it was a start of an epic Poem but now I see It is a song. I started off writing songs. Hear is some tips for you. You need a bridge a bridge is a chores that stretches in the middle of a song some use a list of rap like: If my hate begins to bleed, I fall down to my knees, asking some one to believe in me. ex..

An others use a beautiful rhythm Like: It was hard for me__ to sing wa_y out loud, my heart ski__ps, a beat, and every head was bowed______.

You Follow me?

This is sort of like a bridge but needs meaning Great Job I guess I have to listen to it to have a better understanding of this song. Note I have wrote 32 songs and all are sucessful.

Colors swirl

(Colors swirl)-echo

Floors tilt

(Floors tilt)-echo

Chaos builds

(Chaos builds)-echo

Time stands still

(Time stands still)-echo

[RachelReaper]

I was going more for the extended rhythm, I just didn't put the underscore in the middle of the words because I've never seen it done on a lyric sheet.

[Talismanic]

What a song! Catchy and I don't even know the music...:)

[Owlgirl]

Wow! This is excellent! Well done! It's beautiful and I love the echo part!

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like it what kind of song is it? Rock, metal, what kinda beat will it have?

[RachelReaper]

Originally, I wrote to be a kind of rock song. I got the inspiration after listening to the band "Pretty Reckless".

[Harley (arbiter)]

So you kinda want a rock beat Huh.... classic rock or new age? I'm asking cuz if you have a good sound to this it'll be pure amazingness

[RachelReaper]

Ugh........... I just kind of wrote this spur of the moment (as in, like, 5 seconds ago), I haven't given much thought yet, other than the lyrics and melody.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh Alrighty then sorry but if you ever get the time you should try and find a beat for it! :)

[RachelReaper]

I'll try :)