Best Friend

Best Friend

A Poem by RachelReaper
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I cried a little the first time I wrote this.

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Best Friends

"Okay, Children, line up."

Door with green, red, and yellow paper apples.

First in line. Twist the knob. Peer outside.

Walk down the hal-

I shriek, my friends and class mimics, everyone panics.

Eyes flung wide open,

A man with a rabid fury inside his gun stands beside

A sticky red smeared across the bulletin board

Dripping down like raindrops on glass

To a sunken form haphazardly lying in a dark puddle.

The horrific stench of death.

Dashing, yelling, running, madhouse chaos.

Me. Frozen to this spot. Man. Gun. No.

Pointed at her head.

The one with the other half to my necklace.

No hesitation daunts his face.

Finger movements over a trigger "click"

Mid step, she bounds , running towards me

When a sudden jolting cuts through the atmosphere.

Buried in her head...

It stops. For a second. For me. It stops.

The slumber party, we were in trouble for watching a PG-13 movie

gone.

Field day, when we won the two-legged race

Gone.

I was too scared to ride the big roller coaster by myself, but we went together, and

GOne.

Playground tag everyday at recess that never ended, though you were always faster...

GONe.

Two pieces to this heart, and the other half is

GONE.

She drops.

I clap a hand over my mouth, others rush past.

I can't scream, I can't run, I sink to the ground. I crawl.

Almost trampled by a live or die stampede

This... table... might... work...

Numb, vision blinking in and out of focus, Nightmare, please no.

Can't happen, can't take it.

Eyelids glued open, saltwater makes oceans to pour down my cheeks.

Huddled in a sniffling ball.

The man. My teacher. My class. Her. Gone.

Her head hit the ground awkwardly and is turned to stare at me with a blank expression,

I see her face from my place under the table.

How could she have been the one that-

My throat constricts, my stomach churns molten acid, my eyes feel like hot coals,

I choke on a sob.

Only one thought can make it to me through the haze.

The room is silent, I reach my shaking hands up to my neck and I unhook my half of the heart from my neck.

Silver. Hanging on a simple chain with the word "best" in pink letters.

It's dangerous, too dangerous, I shouldn't do it,

But I have to. For her.

No one is around.

I mange to slowly, slowly drag myself to her.

To the shell that used to be her.

My hands stick in the pool of...

A sharp intake of my breath, covering my eyes with my arm.

I can't, I just can't think.

With hands trembling, I almost drop it,

I lay my half of the heart on her stomach.

My piece of the necklace clasps into place

Along the jagged line of her half of the heart. Magnetic.

I take a deep breath and have to use all of my strength to cautiously look.

When I do look at the two halves together,

A solemn, emptied out feeling of loss seeps through my veins like poison when I see the

Two words. One eight year old girl like me.

"Best Friend"

 

 

© 2012 RachelReaper


Author's Note

RachelReaper
If you guys didn't know, today was the day that there was shooting at an elementary school... I just... I felt like I needed to do something. To do something to recognize those kids and staff that died, and to show that it will forever effect those kids who saw... No child should ever have to see someone die, it leaves a lasting effect on them and an awful scar on there soul. This is what happens, because those kids who died have friends and families and also to put it into perspective of a kid's point of view. They didn't deserve that, no one does.

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As soon as I started reading this I knew instantly what it was about. It is a terrible and senseless tragedy and this piece captured the horror of what those poor children must have felt. My heart breaks for them and their families. You wrote this respectfully and from the heart. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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It scares me to think that a thing like this could happen in such a safe town. It makes me wonder what if it happened to someone I know? I feel so bad for those kids. They'll never live to see another sunrise, to count the stars at night, not even to open their presents on Christmas day (Or maybe Hannukkah) My only hope is that their parents donate their gifts to Toys for Tots. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

yes, may God's good grace be with them.
that is so sweet of you. I heard that only the teacher got killed but it is still awful it just shouldnt have happened, I hope the person that did it realizes what they did and I hope it will always be in the back of their brain and heart and know what they are capable of. But most of all I hope he is forgiven by at least one person.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Art Lover/Love Writing

11 Years Ago

yeah it was. and just to get the word out I made a contest called Fiction Fun so if you want join..... read more
RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

i did, i saw it. I believe i was your first contestant
Art Lover/Love Writing

11 Years Ago

really? oh, thanks
What happened was so sad and tragic. :( I don't see why such a thing had to happen. Beautiful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

thank you
I felt like crying! I cant even imagine any of my friends dying! Beautiful
Loved it..

Posted 11 Years Ago


RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

thank you for your review
Anonymous Girl

11 Years Ago

You are welcome
This is a sad, sad tribute to the victims, beautiful...

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a wonderful tribute. Amazing job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

thank you
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

:)
as a parent, I mourn for the parents. As a former 8 year old, I am in shock. your poem expressed it well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beautifully sad. I'm crying...
This is what happens when we live in a world full of darkness and sin. For all those families with lost ones are in our prayers, and thoughts..
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

i pray for all of them
I tried to stay away from the news about this, at least for now so I didn't have to feel anything yet but... You got me... Crying.

Posted 11 Years Ago


RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

its very sad...
Its truly terrible the horror these children were subjected to today. 27 lives. 27 personalities. 27 dreams, all shattered in the short time it takes to pull a trigger. You protrayed the sorrow with such ease, thank you for sharing such an impactful poem on such a tragic day like today.

Posted 11 Years Ago


RachelReaper

11 Years Ago

I felt like I needed to share the injustice of this somehow, thank you for reviewing

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