Runaway

Runaway

A Poem by RachelReaper
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a poem

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 Let life take me where it may,

Wherever that might be,

I'm just another runaway.

I don't care where this road goes,

Carrying me out of Hell,

This is the path I chose. 




 

Grasping every opportunity coming this way
Don't worry, I won't be home,

I'm just another runaway.

Off the streets, an alley cat,

I'll roam freely and forever,

And dodge every planned attack




 

One Place is where I won't stay,

You'll never see me again.

Because I'll always be a runaway

With one too many friends.


© 2013 RachelReaper



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Awesome, easy flow. I enjoyed reading it over and over again =] You tied the theme together throughout very impressively

Thanks for sharing, Rachel!

Koodoos

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow this poem is great, the best I have read on here, this is so well written an planned out, the photo you have included works well and really sets the atmosphere and mood that you are tying to create in this piece of work. The poem flows really well. Great work fantastic well done, keep up the great work. Love your work as well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Love that last stanza... Great poem!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Melancholy, and defiant independence ripple through your poem. Nice write Rachel. What did you mean with your last line, "With one to many friends"? Seems like it may have a personal meaning which you keep to yourself. It left me curious.

Posted 4 Years Ago


RachelReaper

4 Years Ago

Well if it is a personal meaning... it shall remain personal. *grins* but I'm glad you liked it.
I enjoyed this and the photo too...nicely done and I liked the form too...Rose

Posted 4 Years Ago


RachelReaper

4 Years Ago

thank you, rose.
It has a really great flow, I really like the line One Place is where I won't stay. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


An interesting piece. Nicely crafted, really good. Enjoyed reading.

Posted 4 Years Ago


RachelReaper

4 Years Ago

thank you for your review
"I don't care where this road goes,
Carrying me out of Hell,
This is the path I chose. "...my favourite in all. so determined and so keen to live independently. it's a nice piece.


Posted 4 Years Ago


a great rhyme scheme ABACDC ( if i have counted correctly,) you have freed yourself from the ordinary dull couplet form and written a fine poem..

Posted 4 Years Ago


RachelReaper

4 Years Ago

thank you :)
interesting, i'm not sure what to say as far as an involved review is described, but it's interesting.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Hey!!!!! My name is Rachel, and my unofficial last name is Reaper. I am 14 years old. Blood and kisses to all who review my work, I appreciate it so much and couldn't express to you how much it means .. more..

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