Star-Struck Symphony

Star-Struck Symphony

A Poem by RachelReaper
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I decided I was lacking in the happy poetry, so I wrote this to show my brighter side :)

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Star-struck symphony

Grab a sun ray

On a sunny day

And launch yourself

Into the stars

Where you'll greet the meteors

And zoom way past Mars

You'll go far out

In the galaxy

As long as you're never afraid

And you're always beside me

We'll see the aliens

And maybe stay for a chat

Before we fly away

To the constellation packs

Then we'll sneak out

To the moon

Where we'll see astronauts

In funny space cocoons

So just remember

Before I say good night

Our adventure was anything

But a dream

It's as real as you believe it is

Keep our journey in your mind's eye

And never lose the sight to see

Our lovely star struck symphony

Tonight  

 

 

 

 


© 2012 RachelReaper



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RachelReaper
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Nice imagery, nice poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is a pretty poem and for some reason reads like it would be a theme song to a children's cartoon show. As a matter of fact, it reminds me of an episode of "The Magic School Bus". Of course, now that I've thought of that, I have the theme song stuck in my head.

Anyway, you have some pretty nice descriptions of the things to be done.

Nice job.

-Caradoc

Posted 5 Years Ago


RachelReaper

5 Years Ago

haha, I used to love the magic school bus
I loved this poem. It perfectly put into words what I have forever thought about dreams and reality. They can collide, don't you think?

Posted 5 Years Ago


Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Exactly! I would love it if you would review some of my writing.
RachelReaper

5 Years Ago

sure, I'm starting to like your line of thinking already, my friend
Phillitup

5 Years Ago

:)
This is cool! I found the energy fun and I could see people zooming around the universe. I loved your use of symphony!

Posted 5 Years Ago


RachelReaper

5 Years Ago

thank you!
angelface13

5 Years Ago

Stating the truth!
This is so beautiful! It reminds me of a beautiful song by Julian Lennon. It is called "Space" if you want to look it up for even more inspiration.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I enjoyed this poem as well as the imagery, favorite lines;
It's as real as you believe it is

"Keep our journey in your mind's eye

And never lose the sight to see

Our lovely star struck symphony"
Perfectly written!



Posted 5 Years Ago


wowo.. amazing poem
i like it..
you tell about dream that like true
i really like it.. :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


"It's as real as you believe it is
Keep our journey in your mind's eye
And never lose the sight to see
Our lovely star struck symphony
Tonight ".i sorely like these lines.really.you have got a wonderful imagination.i like your idiosyncrasy.i like reading such stuffs too....the way you portrait your imagination in it is really appreciable.nice work.i enjoyed reading it

Posted 5 Years Ago


Again, title grabbed me. It paints a beautiful picture.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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The title caught my eye and I wasn't disappointed:) Lovely dream of flight, dear poet! I loved it :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


RachelReaper

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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