hero or heroine

I trusted you!
you played me as if i were a game

played -n- won

i was always the pawn

you the master, disguised as a Marine

fell for the hero act 

only to see your not the hero

but the villain 

and me the damsel in distress 

only catch is i was never

meant to be saved but to be use in your game 

Author's Note

sorry for the spelling errors

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Very clever poem!! I really liked it.... In the title, do you mean "heroine" and not the drug: Heroin? I thought it was going to be a poem about hitting up the familiar downward spiral. lol Nope.... far from what I thought it was going to be. Good thing you have talent to interest my sordid mind I rent. : ) Thank You.... for sharing this poem. xox -Mark

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

heartbreaking story like poem, full of raw emotion i really enjoyed it though:)
is it about anyone in particular? if so sorry you were treated so badly sure u will find better.
best wish's.... cimmy xxxooo

[Sarmelendez]

yeah it was i learned that he used me and played me very well and i have found better this guy treats me right

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thats great :) im so happy for you :)

[tuvi]

crisp like bacon :P
but well wrapped up and cut throat :)
raw and real !!!

[steph.winphry]

:'(

[Sarmelendez]

dont cry

[Vikrantsingh]

Small and nicely wrapped :)

Loved it :)
- Singh

[Sarmelendez]

thank you

[Vikrantsingh]

Welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem a lot. A very good work...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)