IMPULSES

IMPULSES

 

Impulses of my mind and body are strong

They are in sync with the thump, thump of my heart

I feel my heart is all a flutter

Lay your head to my breast

Listen to the rhythm

STOP--I said listen and not to kiss

This is my show and I am directing

My impulses will be the star of this show

I want to feel and touch you

I touch your face

My lips touch yours

I need to place kisses in places you have forgotten

And in a few places you are well acquainted with

My momentum is building

DON'T MESS THIS UP--by trying to take control

Let my impulses have free reign

OH, BABY, the impulses are becoming a flurry of feelings

Reaching that climatic end

Drifting down like snow-slow and lazy

AHHH!!!--you enjoyed my impulses, didn't you

DON'T LIE--with all that noise you made

My impulses was your thrill

Ooooo baby, don't do that

You will have my impulses going again

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

"Impulses..." what a great title for a poem.

DON'T MESS THIS UP--by trying to take control
(I love those lines. How ballsy! I hate it when a guy messes things up too! lol)
Very sensual, but powerful all at the same time. a unique write. great job.

[Buddhistboy73]

Great write - you definitely had my impulses going with this pacy, passion filled write..;)
First piece of yours I have read, but I like it..
"STOP- I said listen and not to kiss"....great line, had me smiling...
Well done!

[Soul Magic✯]

wow this one is very hot and sexy from beginning to end. very delectable to read... i admire your ink :)

[Alias Fletcher]

nice.

[laceyjane23]

A very sensual piece great read!

[Sarah]

Hah, loved this! Very erotic. ;) Had fun reading this!

[Undying Glory]

wow. i haven't read any romantic poems in a LONG time, but this is a great one. really good

[Janice Ann]

Very sensual...sexy. Well done! Yummy indeed!

JaniceAnn

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Very erotic and full of desire i can feel all of the moves here that the lady controls the movement as each sway to a sychronicity orchestral movement the love juices are flowing as is the imagination in full flow i say just bring it on baby i'm feeling hot just reading this wonderful poem

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow! Shower time! Great poem breat visual and a romantic theme to it as well. This is some of your finest work. I plan on sending some read request for this one. I'm sure others will like it as well.