Dead Emotions

This is a poem of what I the three weeks after my boyfriend broke up with me for one of my besties.

The world I had,
Has fallen apart.
And so has,
My fragile heart.

We were once one,
But only I gave my heart,
And soon after that,
You tore it apart.

Now I don't feel,
Loved,
Happy,
Or sad.

My feelings,
Are numb.
My emotions,
Dead.

Author's Note

Critisize it as much as you want. Oh and please tell me what you rate it. I told my brother and he rates it a 7/10.

Reviews

[Mitch*Dandy]

Nice poem.. really shocked it came from you! Lol... Anyway, I like it a lot. 8/10

[P.S I Love You]

nice!!!!!

[rhyno]

i like it ...... because its straight to d point no beating around d bush........ it tells exactly how u feel when s**t happends ........so to speak........... 7/10

[dearly beloved]

Exactly!!!! How I felt last night... I was actually going to write something like this, but you beat me to it - amazingly, might I add! Great job, I'm going to subscribe.