When an Angel Weeps~

"Do you hear me calling you?"

Take my hand oh weary one

fall into my arms of grace

oh, Earth Angel how tired you

must be

Taming fear severing ties of evil

tasting tears of sorrow and joy

filling the cup of all who spill

silly fools we are

VOID

Lay with me here

in this plush bed of green

let me kiss your brow creased

from yesterdays pain and today's

emptiness

feel the me that wants to fill

the void of you

LOVE

Receive from my hands ancient melodies

that evaporate all that is dark

the same hands that sears light back

into the well of souls to feed the

seed of self...of soul

REBIRTH

Sleep inside my arms fold

feel your breath become mine

release

walk with me here inside my

own dreams...where we will dance

and sing...where our blood combines with

the rhythm of the universes heart beat

SERENITY

Gathered light from places beyond

the minds eye

a weary angel is healed

within body...sacred

within soul...divine

within spirit...reborn

TRANQUILITY

Have you ever seen an angel reborn?

I have...

They sit inside life's image

on a swing..with fairies at their feet

where angelic whispers weave through

their hair...where past collides with today

where today just simply is

chin to chest

release (is) life renewed

magic again pumps through the wings

once broken...

ETERNAL

Reviews

[Midnight Queen (Amanda)]

This is amazing, no other way to describe it. great job

[Lily Mae]

Thank you so much Amanda..xo

[Transience]

the title appears a bit banal at first but not enough to suppress the intrigue in the mind of the to- be reader...and when one delves in,there's room for nothing but point blank adoration........life and surreal things are entwined with with so much grace........absolutely haunting.....thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece....God bless...

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Transience.. I appreciate your review and the fact that you enjoyed it :) xo

[Winter Red Tears]

This is amazing, no other words describe it. The words all fit into each other like a net, so many meanings, so many things to think about. I love it!

[Lily Mae]

Thank you.. for the great review and for reading me..xo

[smurfett]

Awesome

[Lily Mae]

Thank you..xo :)

[Dream Weaver]

As always I am in awe of your writing capabilities!
Simply perfect! xo

[Lily Mae]

Thank you..xo Your always so good to me..xo :)

[Dream Weaver]

:))

[....]

I really enjoyed this write, love the begining. Amazing

[Lily Mae]

Thank you so much.. I'm glad..

[Rusty]

Thank you. This write adds hope to me.

[Lily Mae]

I'm glad and thank you.. xo :) that makes me smile..x

[stars are far]

i loved this soo much.. well done

[Lily Mae]

Thank you so much..xo

[stars are far]

you are welcome :)

[Elisa Laura]

You're there for those who deserve a really good friend dear. Wonderful ode, and with your words you just gave the help was needed, you nailed it into perfection. Amazingly done. Sensitive, Emotional, but with tons of trust and power.

E.L.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Eli..xo

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful, Lily...it must be a Capricorn thing, yet set that aside, you have one lovely poem that flows like a river of emotions, yet calmly and gently into the serene sunset. Lovely.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Everett..xo it was for a friend that was having a hard time..and so this flew out.. I appreciate your wonderful review..x

[Everett DeValle]

You are most welcome, Lily...I just told an old poet friend how I felt today, and it hurt my feelings...its because he is caught up in this whole popularity contest...I wished him well....Lily, please know this, with all bs aside, that you are a wonderful writer, and I have always enjoyed reading your poetic art of work.

~Ev