Black Light~

                                                         Black light my lips

to see the residue left

behind from our hungered truth

Hold it against my heart

and see the imprint of your love

white on flesh

Feast with me until

the batteries begin to fade

suspending breath for just one moment

Turn the black light out

I don't need to see 

when I can taste...kiss me

Reviews

[Frank James Davis]

Lovely, enchanting and surprisingly arousing.
No "batteries" appear to be necessary, Lily.

[SmileBig :)]

Hmm I like this. Very good job :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

How damn, that poem had a wonderful twist at the end... I like how it starts with sometimes you don't need to see to believe than turns into actions speak louder than words.

[Pax]

provocative and captivating..great

[Lily Mae]

Thank you so much.. :) xo

[Steel]

Completely unique, a wonderful visual tone in this poem. Enjoyed it..!

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Steel.. :) xo

[Steel]

You're welcome...great writing!

[Kenneth S.]

You took something I associate with finding the after-effects on a bed, and turned into something lucid, passionate and erotic.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Kenneth.. it was just for a little fun.. x :)

[Kenneth S.]

Excellent for sure.

[Lily Mae]

:) thank you..x

[Free]

You seem to have a gift for bringing a moment again and again into the deep intricacies of the present :)

[Lily Mae]

Why thank you ;) xo lol

[Free]

No thank you lil :)

[Lily Mae]

Hahaha ok.. stop lol

[Free]

No you stop :p

[Lily Mae]

I can't....it's a curse lol

[Free]

Break out your Jedi nun tricks :p

[Lily Mae]

Are you suggesting a new write for me hahahha... I can get very spiritual..x

[Free]

Well if it comes to mind then by all means :)

[Lily Mae]

I'll see what comes to mind..x

[Eloha]

This is excellent Lily, your gift of spiritual bareness and intense nearness (sometimes bordering on the erotic), continues to fascinate me.

A poet that has their own signature style is a most intriguing and sometimes, the sign of true authorhood.

So I guess this means I can count you among my favorite.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you so much..xo

[victoria]

oh this one calls for the blindfold, beautiful lily mae

[Lily Mae]

:) yes and part two maybe lol.. thank you victoria..x

[I am Nelly]

Oh so sexy, full of desire. Then the demand to consummate that desire, to act upon it, no thought or word, just deed. Another delicious read Miss Lily

[Lily Mae]

I'm glad you liked it :) xo