Please tell me you Know~

"starshine"

Words pour out of my chest into the air

waiting to be captured in the swift movement

or moment of poetic grace

and yet it is caught in the ripple

of the free flow

engaging all faucets of life around me

How could I spend one more word on you?

Do you not know yet what you are to me?

Every single word penned with thoughts of

you have bled from places where seeds of

desire and unconditional love are born

where yesterday becomes a blur with the

bliss of tomorrow sitting at the edge of my tongue

Being with you isn't about full action or deed

it's the simplistic moments where smiles are born

and kisses are shared

where laughter and tears both are embraced

and fear is cast out with the light and love we share

it's time of breath...the rise and fall...the flow

the feel

your essence alone impregnates my senses

How could I spend one more word on you?

You would have to be dead not to feel it

blind not to see it

void of feelings to not know it

deaf not to hear it in my voice

void of taste not to be able to savor it

Do you not know yet what you are to me?

Yes you know...

So now what to do?

I vote for...loving me

simply

(love me)

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is so tender and honest- true love is such a beautiful thing

[Lily Mae]

Yes it is.. a treasure in time..x thank you for reading me..xo

[Ed Fagan]

This is a tender, beautiful read ...

[Lily Mae]

Thank you so much Ed...x

[Clayton Bardwell]

What is it about these words that make me question my beliefs and understandings. I'm a rhymer. I've known it all along, but yet these poems of yours make me wonder.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Clayton..wondering is always good..it opens the door to more possibilities..xo

[intuitivesoul]

This says something I have tried to say once before. This is a very nice piece of work, wish I could have ran across it not long ago.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you..xo :)

[no sun]

It would be so simple to love a writer like you. So much beauty and passion. You would get my vote too!

[Lily Mae]

Thank you.. you made my day.. xo :)

[TheSweet]

A writer who yearns for love? Nothing overly new... A writer that binds concepts of writing into love on a page? Much more conceptually fantastical :) I loved this for the concept and the opening stanza feels very much like the 'words that pour out of my chest' in a particularly emotional moment... never write them down though, do I? :P Woops. Thanks for the great write!

[Lily Mae]

Thank you.. xo :)

[Corset]

The write is simply wonderful, top to bottom beautiful.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Ms. Scarlet..xo

[EMF]

On one hand it breaks the heart. On the other it lifts it and caresses it. On the other (just ignore the three hands thing) it reveals. A stunning love poem that reaches out and touches the soul of any reader. Intense and pounding with passion, but as soft as a feather. Wonderful

[Lily Mae]

The things you get to do with those three hands lol.. Thank you EMF.. It was most definitely a write from the heart..xo

[Steel]

A beautiful, picturesque outpouring of emotion...toward a worthy end.

Excellent...

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Steel...for the great review and for reading me..x

[Elisa Laura]

That was beautiful sis, I loved all of it. You know what I like so much about your writes is, you always dance on words.... as it reads as the music, to dance and swing on, even when it's a little sad, it's captivating. Truly enjoyed this one, Eli xo

[Lily Mae]

Thank you so much Eli... you melted my heart with such a great review..xo