Two Stars..One moon~

Where do my tears go when they flow from my heart?

For a moment with breath baited by love... can you feel

the me inside you screaming to be birthed?

Many say they would lasso the moon for their lovers

(not me)

I want to handcuff you to the moon feeding forever

on the reflection of the two silver stars that graced our lives,

kissed our souls, deepened our sighs

Maybe forever is clouded by the cloak of fear or familiar

while I stand naked and bare within this cloak of love

just for you

I beg of you to untie me...see me...touch the skin

that also is in need of your flesh to connect with mine

fly with me into the night sky then fleeing curious eyes

in the light of our days

place your hand on my chest and feel my heart beat for you

only you

(or)

Stay in the shallow waters of familiar

walk the shores, lakes and streams that you know

just know...you will always in sadness and deep despair

be left wondering...always empty in not knowing

why the universe place two silver stars in sight of the moon

Let me take you there...to the moon

where I would hand cuff you for all eternity

ties that bind...lips pressed, hands in firm grip

gold on silver

Question this? I do not..x

Reviews

[Eric James]

WOW!! i read alot of poems on here and in books as well, but this here is a master peice in my eyes! " " i beg of you to untie me...see me... touch the skin that also is in need of your flesh to connect with mine" so deep and meaningful this poem is . defintiely one of my favorites i have read in a long time now. I can relate to this with my reationship. beautifully written !

[. serah .]

~ ah... an epic read... after a really long time... you're on to the truth, oh luminous one... and look how you say it like such a pretty and passionate poetess... mesmerizing poetry... i'm ready to fly on the wings of your words... gorgeous poetry... a stunning insight into all things love... including the fear of it...

[Revery]

"while I stand naked and bare within this cloak of love
just for you"

Now that's a fun thought!

Proclamations of love and surrender are stronger then any bound or force. To win a pure heart is more bliss than most can appreciate or tolerate. Most run out of fear of something that powerful. Only when two equals find this together is perfection found.

Excellent write.

[The Cobra Lounge]

You hidden metaphors could not be more crystal clear. Beautiful.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Muse..xo ;)

[Southern Cross]

I need to send this to someone I know !! " Stay in the shallow waters of familiar
walk the shores, lakes and streams that you know
just know...you will always in sadness and deep despair" My thoughts exactly..Love the sensuality you are always so adept at expressing

[Lily Mae]

Send away and good luck.. :) xo

[Katrina Mckeown]

absoulutley stunning , just beautifully constructed! Lovely read!

[Hotwater]

Very romantic... very girlie (nothing wrong with that!) ... it's just a lovely write.
*bird*

[Lily Mae]

Good because shhh (I'm a girl) lol..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Spellbindingly romantic *sigh*

I want to handcuff you to the moon feeding forever
on the reflection of the two silver stars that graced our lives,
kissed our souls, deepened our sighs

Oh yes absolutely lovely.

[Black Hole Halo]

Nice, very very nice.