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Vulnerability Born~

Vulnerability Born~

A Poem by Lily Mae

Advise me please to stop
my breath is shallow
while my heart quickens

Delicate figures of me are
inside screaming to tell you
the secrets I've kept

It has been told on the delicate
of my skin...the echo of your voice
invades the shadows of my thoughts

Intoxicate me again with you
dripping with curious fervor
while exploring the unseen me

Desperation seeks a home to hide
yet all doors are closed
my words cannot be restrained

You see I miss you
the intense, inquisitive you
probing my thoughts, my heart
my soul

I miss someone that actually
aches for me
leaving me open and vulnerable

Save me please~

© 2016 Lily Mae

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Hey Lily, just wanted to say hi and to say it's good to see a familiar face from time to time, just my way of saying water under the bridge.

I love this poem the flow and always have a way of enticing your readers. Have a good one...thank you for sharing. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

Lily Mae

1 Year Ago

I do love it but I found a place that you can express anything without ridicule.. there was a lot of.. read more
¥ay $wagger

1 Year Ago

Hmm, you can pm the poetry site...

Yeah, unfortunately, that drama was probably the l.. read more
¥ay $wagger

1 Year Ago

I pay no mind to my Haters, the naysayers because they've been my biggest fans over the years. :)
' It has been told on the delicate ~ of my skin.. '
what a unique use of words.

Seems tonight is full of love .. the softness of whispers, secrets golden, words silver. As ever always you paint such glorious thoughts, scenes and emotions in equal amount. 'I miss someone that actually aches for me.. ' . Yes, the magic of such feelings, luring the heart..

Posted 1 Year Ago

Lily Mae

1 Year Ago

I saw your name on the list and thought wow.. I have missed her. So thank you for stopping by and b.. read more

1 Year Ago

Hope you might pop in now and again.. and again! Am awake very late, can't sleep and have discovere.. read more
These words swim the sea of lonley souls...
We are all drowning it seems. Yet here, one brave soul stops her struggle to float the waves of expression and call into the inky blackness of a world wide desolation to admit her frailty... This act alone saving herself as she accepts what was, what us and what may come.
Vulnerability is the seed of actualization. Beautiful write. Inspirational.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Lily Mae

1 Year Ago

Thank you David.. I missed this somehow.. much love to you..xo
This is amazing! I can really relate to this piece and it portrays the longing and aching in such a terribly beautiful way. Great work.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Lily Mae

1 Year Ago

Thank you so very much...xo

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Added on May 28, 2016
Last Updated on May 28, 2016


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