In your eyes

I swear...I can climb
the fibers of the wind
when you look into me

I'm absorbed...caught by your glance
mesmerized in your eyes,
and your irides
the way they move
I'm trapped in their light
Only you can do this
And you ask me to stay
How can I possibly move?

Reviews

[Anne]

I wish there was a heart button lol

[Lina Lotus]

Haha that would be ideal. Thanks for stopping by

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem a lot. The eyes have great power over us if we allow. I like the flow of thoughts leading to very nice ending. Thank you Lina for sharing your amazing poetry.

Coyote

[Lina Lotus]

Thank you for you kind words poet

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lina.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

intriguing write...and the last two lines...perfect...
"how can i possibly move?"
it's like being frozen in love...in a good way...not frozen out, but frozen in.

j.

[Lina Lotus]

Thank you Jacob your comment means a lot:)

[Sami Khalil]

"when you look into me

I'm absorbed...caught by your glance
mesmerized in your eyes,"

[Sami Khalil]

Soft and mesmerizing. Pulls you in and keeps you...Excellent...:).................

[Lina Lotus]

Wow! Thanks Sami for your much too kind review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:::)))))