Flutterbye

Flutterbye

A Poem by Pixieblue
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Up on the rooftops, caving in.

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If im not in my house,
it doesn't mean im not at home.

If im not surrounded by people,
don't just expect that im alone.

If i am not smiling,
It does not mean that i am sad.

If i am dying,
that means that i am glad.

If you can't see me,
do not assume i am not there.

For if you all look closely,
i am dancing in the air.



© 2014 Pixieblue



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I think this has promise, lots of promise and it reminds me of the words I once discovered written on a Kleenex left next to the stereo at a party in 1978....In effect eternally dated... nice

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful.

I can feel pain. I can feel the loneliness.

It jumps in my stomach when I read this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have one deep and old soul, one can feel from your writing!

Keep writing my friend, this was brilliant!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wish I could say more but I'm not great with reviews: I loved this piece, short but full of interesting and thought provoking lines, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2014
Last Updated on October 20, 2014
Tags: home, alone, death, assume, air, flutter, bye.

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Pixieblue
Pixieblue

kent, gravesend, United Kingdom



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I'm Leah. Here's a few things to know about me: I'm an artist. I'm a musician. I'm a writer. I have ADHD. I'm dark at heart. I think everyone is wonderful who knows how to love and be loved/ .. more..

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