Words

Words

A Poem by Pixieblue
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Just a small piece, it has been going through my head all day.

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Words cut deeper
 than blades will ever write.
Is it so,
when the blades will write the books,
tonight.


© 2014 Pixieblue



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Yes indeed, epic.....................................

Posted 2 Years Ago


epic.

so short yet says so much

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful.

Nothing is to be criticized. .

Posted 3 Years Ago


I like where you're going with the first statement but the second seems unfinished in a way. To me at least, it's not clear where you're going with it. It might be clearer to the reader if you choose different punctionation or reorder the words. Another suggestion I have is to explain why the blades are writing the books tonight because I think the beautiful imagery you've created shouldn't be lost in muddled causality

Posted 3 Years Ago


that was really great, very powerful :) :) :)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on November 2, 2014
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Tags: words, blades, books, writing.

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Pixieblue
Pixieblue

kent, gravesend, United Kingdom



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I'm Leah. Here's a few things to know about me: I'm an artist. I'm a musician. I'm a writer. I have ADHD. I'm dark at heart. I think everyone is wonderful who knows how to love and be loved/ .. more..

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