My Scarlet Tears

Juliet, said the moon Why do you cry? And a scarlet tear fell from her Pale glass eyes She smiles in sadness Looking upon her broken heart Juliet, said the stars Why do you run? And she hides behind her hair She reaches to him  High from her window  As the dawn has shatters into night Juliet, said the sky Why do you hide? And in a broken whisper she speaks He alone has loved me And not even the heavens Can take this from me Juliet, said the moon Why do you cry? And I whisper, and I smile, and I speak Because I… was never Juliet  And he…was never my Romeo.

Reviews

[Gage Purdy]

I don't really know what to say at this point... I love this... *100000000000000/100*

[l'ange de mort]

reminds me of yesterday's play put up by sec twos: "Juliet, my little chinadoll" :) Good job!

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

beautiful poem, beautifully expressed emotions.
'Because I… was never Juliet
And he…was never my Romeo.
was simply awesome. Good job!

[Miss Coral]

Chills. Yup.

Excellent piece. The repetition was great, the last two lines concise and speaking stories. Powerful, vivid, beautiful, sad. Great piece.

[Daydreamer54]

wow, this was very deep and poetic! I enjoyed reading it! :)