Raining Tears

Poetic lyrics - "Inspired by Depeche Mode lyrics of "Precious" and The Verve's "Love is Noise".

How far do we get when we're still alive?

Where do we stay when we're not buried in the ground?

I know the answers but I never reply

I wish I was wrong, I wish I could fly

 

Walking through the clouds above me and you

An angel cries and my heart feels confused

It's raining tears and we feel so cold

The frosty days are burning my soul

 

What do we need to belong together?

Is it a question of time or it will never happen?

Raining tears so wildly and intense

Broken glass in the way and my feet feel no pain

 

Walking through the clouds above me and you

An angel dies and my heart feels so bruised

It's raining tears all over my face

Love is a mirror, love is a grace

Love is a curse, love is a maze -

Love is.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

Walking through the clouds above me and you
An angel cries and my heart feels confused
It's raining tears and we feel so cold
The frosty days are burning my soul

Wow, beautiful work here. You've taken your inspiration and created something brand new. Again, great job Karina.

[Angela]

This is beautiful from beginning to end. I like the fluidity and emotion. Love the contrast in the line "The frosty days are burning my soul" Good technique, and awesome write.

[Richard Williams]

An interesting concept, sharply penned. An effective display of emotion, one feels your words. The lines, the imagery, very fine: "The frosty days are burning my soul." Well done.

[Cynthia]

Such Beautiful piece of writing! True beauty is in it, the story behind is so loving while your choose of words are cooperating with it! I also love how you end this poem with ' Love is.' it really gets reader thinking and searching the answer inside ourself!

Overall, I think its beautiful, with a amazing flow of words, and gets us to a wonderful journey with your poem!

[Rose Masen]

Beautiful and thoughtful. I think it taught me a lessen, as well. Thank you for sharing this.

[Yue Zhang]

I like the repetition. It really emphasis "Love."

[V-C-L]

This is so beautiful! Thank you for this experience

[Christopher]

Love it, especially the third stanza.

[Ashley]

OMG THIS IS SOOOO AMAZING THIS TOOK ME through a journey in my mind, so sick.