MY CEREAL SPOON =)

Unfortunatley one morning,

I woke too soon

And couldn't find my cereal spoon,

I searched for hours all around

But didn't see it was on the ground,

I used a silver fork instead,

But my cereals had fallen

through my fork exacly like my mum had said!,

I picked up all the cereals

on the floor,

and placed them in my bedroom draw,

I shut the the draw and walked away

And looked at them the very next day,

But they was the same as yesterday

So I decided to leave them and go away,

My brother sneeked in

and looked in my draw,

I don't think he could believe what he saw

He told me something and ran away,

But I didn't care and left them for a day

The next day came

the sun in saw,

And then I opened my bedroom draw,

The cereals had turned all hairy and green

It's the craziest thing I've ever seen!,

I know what's happened

they've gone all mouldy,

I should of listened

to what my brother had told me!

Reviews

[HorHay3]

ha ha this is a funny poem
i like it very much

[Shelby Taylor]

love it

[GetTheHellOut]

Definately a unique poem and kinda weird as well. I would never thought of writing something like that.
To be honest it kinda maked me laugh at the begging as soon as I've read about the cerial spoon. I like the way it flows. Good job.

[Malik Amandla]

This was very creative, each line made me anticipate reading the next one. I could easily vision the whole thing. I enjoyed the light heart and smooth flow. There are a few minor spelling errors you may want to look over. Like: "Unfortunately" and "moldy" instead of "Unfortunatley" and "mouldy"

[FoolsGold23]

truly unique, can't say I've ever read something about a ceral spoon, but this had the right touch of the bizarre to make it worth reading, nice work!~Pyrite

[Lyrical Love]

whimsical...